Magic

Some say that seeing is believing.
Others say that believing makes it possible.
The difference.
None.
It's magic.
The mythical wonder that binds you.
The wonderful safe haven.
Of spells,
and potions.
Graceful
hand motions.
Magic is beyond mystical might.
Dark and good magic exist.
Look at the world that surrounds you.
Full of magic.
Yes,
it is.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Hi Phillup! There's magic all around us if we have the beauty and wonder in our eyes to see it. And you my friend have that magical view of the world. I compliment you on such maturity of thought and such great crafting of words. Please keep writing. You are going to reach faaaar! 100/100 for this poem. Loved it!

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Jetta Zippora]

Beautiful, epic writing. :) Great job, friend.

[Phillitup]

Thanks

[PurpleQuartz]

It's like you have woven magic itself into these words!!! I can see (just from this) that you are quite talented.

[Dr. Wood ?]

true in every sense..and very finely constructed...And you are right when you say that Magic...no K.....contains more mystery

[Phillitup]

Thank you...you are very aware of the presence of other reviewers! :) I always appreciate people like that...:)

[Rob Santana]

Really good write. One thing I want to mention is you should add the letter k when speaking of real magick. It's helps to separate it from stage magic. I used to practice Magickal arts,yes magick is real.

[Phillitup]

Thanks for the suggestion but I believe that magic spelled with a c contains more mystery. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

[scripted]

your very young but have a graceful way of writing
good job

[Phillitup]

thanks

[Bluefire]

I loved the flow and the word choice, it kinda reminds me of one of my favorite book series as a kid (and still to this day), Harry Potter.
Well penned my friend! ^^

[Phillitup]

:)

[Bluefire]

:3

[zainul]

Mystery surrounding magic has been exposed.
Wonderful work.

[Phillitup]

Thank you very much! I always enjoy thinking about what others can't. They can't because they can't believe in it. I may sound crazy but I believe in lots of these things. That's probably because I have hope for the human race yet. :) I'm glad that you enjoy my writing.

[zainul]

You are too talented.
You can achieve whatever you aspire.
Keep your spirit high.
I am very optimistic about your great future.
Thanks for the lovely words.

[Phillitup]

Thank you...:)

[zainul]

You are welcome...:)

[Sourodip]

I loved the poem.......The way you say about magic.....
''Look at the world that surrounds you.
Full of magic'' truly what is our world if not magic.....

[Phillitup]

Thanks...:)

[Pawprints]

"Of spells and potions. Graceful hand motions." I love the rhythm to this. Keep on writing :)

[Phillitup]

Thanks