Science Fair

I've been working on my science fair project lately.....I mean, I don't really like science fair. So, I chose to write about it.

Hypothesis
Conclusion
Excel
Graph
Formulas
Backboards
Throbbing
Soul
Hours
Inevitable
Ending
Finally
Wait
Science
Notebook
Forgotten
Why?!

Author's Note

This is exactly how I feel right now.

Reviews

[Jocie]

very nice poem

[Leigh]

You have summarised the key points very well it would seem, the bullet point style fits in perfectly with a mathematical or scientific subject - great

[ms. barrie]

very expressive, right to the point, i love the little ironic twist you added at the end. great write, thanks for sharing

[Brookypoo]

excellent....:)

[David Scott]

A clear expression of your mindset. Not my favorite, but I know many students who would relate well...
Be well.

[Phillitup]

thank you....:)

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah science never failed to bring my average grade down so I know where you're coming from...the very word still feels bitter on my tongue...

[Phillitup]

:)

[Ees]

The last four lines:
"Finally
Wait
Notebook
Why?!"- I felt like I was missing something. I am not sure what, but you may want to look into adding something in there to make that part a little more clear. It may have been how the one noun, "notebook" was surrounded by descriptive words and a question that don't relate to "notebook" as far as I can tell. Maybe you need another noun tossed in there too. I am not sure. It could just be me...
The earlier part of the poem is done really well. It moves down the page and a person can imagine being in school easily when you read that part.
I am a particular fan of "Throbbing/ Soul" lines. What an interesting two words to throw into this scientific poem. Great usage there!
Overall, really nice job. (Bringing everybody back to school, I think).

[Phillitup]

Thank you for your suggestions! I'll look at that and think about what word might give it that completeness. I have to agree. I feel it to. Thanks for drawing my attention to that.

[Ees]

No problem.
I am glad that I could be of assistance, if in fact, I have been. Nice work!

[Riley Mistwood]

Lol.I remember this feeling

[Phillitup]

It's so frustrating!

Thanks for spending time reading and reviewing this! :)