Prone

Prone
To love
To clumsiness
To loss
To hope
To joy
To grief
To life

No escape

Reviews

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Very nice write Dell, but I also agree with Icelanna.. Maybe you could add some commas, give it a bit of a rhyme scheme to help the flow of this piece? It's very pretty and simplistic, which is fine. You don't need to change it at all, they're only suggestions (:

[Mir]

Short, but has a point. I like it!

[Theartofburning]

Prone
To Everything.

It's inevitable.

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Great job, it breaks down how we get trapped in our thoughts, our own world and can't get out. I liked it.

[Tori Hughes]

same. absolutely same.

[Bluefire]

Prone to being human. Wouldn't you agree that would be the sum up of this poem?
This is very well done, short yet very emotional.
The "No escape" at the end adds a touch of apprehension to the mix of feelings that comes along with the other lines in the poem.
Very good, well done! ^^

[Phillitup]

Thank you for your ideas and kind words.

[Bluefire]

Not a problem. ^^

[de_maruf]

creative potential idea

[RachelReaper]

I think this takes hold of all of us. But I have one question, why did you use a spider web as your picture? Just out of curiosisty

[Phillitup]

I used it to represent the fact that we get stuck in our ways

[RachelReaper]

I see

[CreativeStroke]

I liked the format and flow of this piece. A lot of people nowadays can relate to this piece and everything it captures in its short simplicity.

[de_maruf]

fine