Inspired

A word
An idea
Grabs my brain
Shakes
Rattles
Rolls
Grasping
In
The
Dark
Snatching
Hope
Inspired

Reviews

[scripted]

this was good...sometimes writing cant really be explained that is how i feel with this... it was simple yet complex...nice job yours truely danielle (scripted)
XXX 12/31/12

[Icelanna]

Love it. Don't forget your punctuation though x

[Phillitup]

I don't see punctuation adding anything good to this but thanks for the insight!

[Andorianskye]

simple, injoyable.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, jerry lee would be proud...i have only one suggestion to this cool poem with quite a beat.


the last word, maybe "inspiring."
"grasping, snatching, inspiring"

[quinfinn]

great poem. and i gotta tell ya, Jerry Lee Lewis would be proud that you included "shake, rattle and roll" in the thought process!

[Shaylynn H.]

I like it, it's simple yet efficient.

[Phillitup]

Thank you!

[s y e]

I love the flow of the poem! Its amazing what can trigger the brain and you come up with some really awesome ideas!!! :D
Another amazing poem from you! ;)
Well done!

[Phillitup]

Thanks!

[s y e]

Anytime!

[Rachel Hanne]

I love it when this happens! It is so random. The smallest occurrence can trigger the brain and your imagination can come up with the craziest/greatest things! It's like woah, why didn't I think of this before? All writers can relate to this.

[Phillitup]

Thank you!

[Rachel Hanne]

No problem :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

puts me in mind of what we poets go through while searching for inspiration to write. Excellent

[Brookypoo]

you are only miner writer keep up the good work and u will continue to grasp real writing good job

[Phillitup]

thanks :)

[Brookypoo]

welcome..any time