Together

Together

A Poem by Phillitup

Together
United
One
Of many
Make a change
Can you?
I can
Inspired?
I am.
Together
We
Can
Do
ANYTHING

© 2012 Phillitup


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I liked the way you wrote this.
Simple, but leaves a good impact.

Keep it up.
^.-

Posted 12 Years Ago


Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
i love the simplicity of this, so few words, yet so inspiring, right to the point. great poem, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
Great message made simple. I loved it, and thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was very fun to read, short, and inspiring all in one little work of art.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
nice nice I like this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
Brookypoo

12 Years Ago

ur welcum
I liked this. Uplifting. I might use punctuation thruout and not bring it in and then leave it out at random... Other than that small obsevation a very solid write.
Be well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
Cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
Nice I love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

12 Years Ago

thanks
morgann <3

12 Years Ago

ur welcome :)
Phillitup

12 Years Ago

:)

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Phillitup
Phillitup

FL



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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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