Lost

My whole essence and presence is driven through

it's funny but I can't contain my excitement when your near

a laughable confession, your love is delinquent

some days I feel as though I'm burning

carried away on a gust of wind I spread

I light up the landscape, my breathe hot

my sighs fanning the flames

and when I yell, everything goes silent

the sun weeps down fiery embers

it looks down on me ad asks,

"why do you scream when no one is listening?"

soon the moons high above it's cool light 

extinguishing the flames, my tears now turn

into the stars that dot the night sky

and everything glows a cool pale white

lost in the night sky

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

quite breathtaking really, though I can't say I loved the repeat of The Night Sky, so close at the end...

[Delilah]

Yeah it still needs tweaking was a first draft< but thanks for taking the time to read and review!