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You texted me after so long, it was that silence that screamed into my ear. I waited, hoped and debated if you'd ever send word again. My stomach flip flops, I cannot control my excitement and fear. You've given me the time of day. But now I know how foolish and ashamed I really should be. How silly of a girl to think you had ever cared when your actions clearly told me how little you thought of me. And yet, desperate I clung to it. I hoped that one day you'd see I was the girl you needed. But no, then she came along and I was once again thrust into the dusty attic where you knew I would wait. And i felt my whole life turing grey and each smile and joy faded. I just kept waiting was I ever a person to you? When will I learn that if a man doesn't put in any effort to show he cares or wants to know you, then he's not worth your time.

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[Sami Khalil]

"silence that screamed into my ear. I waited, hoped and debated if you'd ever send word again. My stomach flip flops, I cannot control my excitement and fear. You've given me the time of day. But now I know how foolish and ashamed I really should be. How silly of a girl to think you had ever cared when your actions clearly told me how little you thought of me. And yet, desperate I clung to it. "
That is some good poetry...:)

[Delilah]

Thanks so much for taking the time to review my work! Glad you liked the poem :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)

[Distantview123]

Sometimes we can be a fool for love, but if love is not returned it can never work. A sad but poetic write.