Mmmmmmm... Yummy!

I love to lick lolly pops,

They’re so sweet & tasty

With a gooey, sticky centre.

Makes me shiver just to consider

The hardness on my tongue.

I love to suck them

When they’re fresh;

And bite them too.

I swirl the tip between my lips

And blow them like bubble gum!

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is funny and made me smile.

[Lily Mae]

Very sweet ;) xx

[Lily]

SO KUTE!!! Lvely! Beautifuly written!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

[prodicallife]

hahahaha....very cuteeeee i guess people like you like to appericiate evrythng and that`s really good...

Regards
PRODICAL

[These Haunted Hallways]

lol! This was really cool, hehe. Tingly in all the right places, with great expression as well. A naughty, yet, fun read, hehe. Great job! :)

M.

[WritersSoul]

Hehe, cute and naughty in a way. Great write :D !

[none]

ahaha a whole new insight to candy and its small euphoric-feeling.

[Orlando Murcia]

Unique,

but I liked it


Well done


Orlando M

[AndyJCash]

O.o oh wow haha

[Kyle]

So sweet! I like this.