A Friend's Wise Words

 

I see mushy poems

about love and guys
how long will it be

for you to realize
words on a screen

won’t get you a date
and if anyone

I can relate
don't keep your thoughts

in your heart and your head
speak what you're thinking

be forward instead
you may be too scared

Afraid of rejection
but in the future

It will be a reflection
of your courage to say

What you're feeling inside
the words that you spoke

and chose not to hide

Reviews

[the_real_me]

this is so true why can't girls just say it in face

[justink :):)]

it was good it made me laugh

[Edward Clay]

bouncy. and the beginning made me laugh a bit. rhythm and tempo are all in place so it works in that respect. i can't say it's something i like particularly as it's not my style (reads as a hallmark card almost), but aside from that, i can admire the structure and the rhyme works without being forced, which in itself is an achievement in this day!