Can you feel your own rain

My own rain falls down

My own rain falls deep

deep down the pains

pains printed on a soul

a soul that never falls asleep

My own rain I can feel

it's salty and muddy

salty since my soul travels

travels through the seas

muddy since my soul hits

hits the ground on it's knees

with bare hand digs

digs six feet under

under a grave

a grave where it can rest in peace

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Mabrook ....Bravo

[dadist poetic]

thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................