A whim

On a whim

its him again

I guess I was the thought of the day

It only gets in the way of what I really need

He brings me joy

if only temporary

he puts a smile on my face

if only for a moment

he makes me feel needed

if only for a second

is that okay?

I mean its only temporary

that temporary stay

if just for a day

is whats needed in my life

before it goes back

to being all gray

Reviews

[Libby]

This is perfectly written. It flows in a sad but steady beat. But technical accomplishments aside. The subject is so relatable. As though you we're pulling the thought out my own head through my eyes upon dental floss which reconfigured as ink on a page. If that makes any sense.

Which it doesn't.

[ramblingsofapoet]

yes it make a lot of sense in a very artistic way. I glad you can relate to it. It is a very sad reality for a lot of people