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when the earth fell
when the moon caved in
when the sky stopped spinning round its lies
when the trees couldn't sing
           the sun forgot how to smile
that's when the stars started falling from her eyes

when a poem cried
when a myth died
           a heart's melody slipped on by
when notes of hope disappeared
           a soulsong was lost
with the stars that fell from her eyes

time will forget all the lessons we've learned
but our hearts can't unlearn how to love or to beat
so time may forget all the tings that we've done
and we may lose sight of the sky
but our hearts can't forget how to love or to beat
or the stars that fell from her eyes

when heaven can be predicted
when we lose all our names
when hearts, hands and whispers all mean the same thing
when foundations shake
when all boundaries break
that's when we open our souls and SING

Author's Note

Comments&critique always welcome.

Reviews

[Jeremiah Medina]

I really like the ending, its a great poem. Wisdom is something that pops into my head after reading this, wise beyond years. I like the whole flow and the imagery is awesome. Thanks for the review earlier, nice write you have here.
... Jeremiah