Negative Space

Do you remember "best friends forever"?

our eyes were mirrors as we stared
into nothing,
nothing,
each lost in our own thoughts
dreams
whispers
so close,
so close,
yet far,
so far;
saying nothing,
nothing,
so close I could feel her
heart
beat;
the beat
of nothing,
nothing,
small smiles trembled on lips,
frozen
in nothing,
nothing,
no space between us,
a yawning chasm holding us apart
with nothing

Author's Note

Comments&critique always appreciated =)

Reviews

[Somebody you've already..]

wow this is an extremly amazing poem. I loved the way it flowed together. I am glad i found u cause i really enjoy your writing.

[TripleCK]

Wow.....
"so close so close yet far so far" really hit me...... I like your writing. I've read some of it, but this is one of my favorites. I think because I feel like this sometimes. I've felt like this before.