Creation Sleeps

Creation Sleeps

A Poem by Deepwater
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6 word Poem

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Perfection through eyes of pure mortals

© 2014 Deepwater


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Precise precis. So few words , so much implied. A gorgeous picture reflecting more than an industrial scene.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice use of words. You said enough.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

Thank you for this review
Thank you for this review

Posted 10 Years Ago


No more words are required.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece contains so much heart and feeling. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

thank you for this review
Whoever said, "simplistic isn't deep" is a moron. I feel the warm breeze, and smell the salt while the birds hope for one last catch. I am at peace... perfect.

Well done Deepwater.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

thank you for this
That's a beautifully poetic line. If you took the photo, it'd make a great caption beneath the exhibit. I once had to come up with poetic lines for an art photographer's published works; wish I had something like this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

this was for a 6 word poem thanks for the review
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Yes that would be perfection indeed. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

thank you for this TL just six words
You gave us just enough to be enticed. I love reads like this. I always enjoy reading you, your work is in a class of its own.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

thanks for this review Patrick
I want you to write more dear on this topic to explicit your thoughts

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deepwater

10 Years Ago

this was a six word contest

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Deepwater
Deepwater

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Hello Thank you for looking In. Just an Old Soldier, Veteran British Army 70-?? Likes to write poems for Fun and fishing in the Gulf of Mexico, have loved and lost now write, Please Keep Writ.. more..

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