"Fragrance of First Night"

"Fragrance of First Night"

A Poem by Deepwater
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First Love "Night"

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This silent night as moonlight sheds, its last rays for the dawn,
A ring of gold lay on your hand, with passion, your virtue, so pure,
Your fragrance lingers upon my lips, from kisses all so true,
Our bodies charged from endless tease, this first night love with you,
How sublime your body yearned for endless love, the awe of all submission,
Whisper of love so entangled the night, reflect our soul's condition,
This intimacy of night's first love, so pure with no ambition,
What more to want, but lusts first love or memories of first night.

gw

© 2014 Deepwater


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"This intimacy of night's first love, so pure with no ambition,
What more to want, but lusts first love or memories of first night"
Beautiful words and description. The memory of sweet kiss and first nights keep us old timers smiling at things done and gone. The poem described beautiful place and memories. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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its beautifully penned... :))

Posted 10 Years Ago


Breathtaking, wonderful writing and beautiful imagery.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You captured the moment beautifully, teasing the senses with vivid imagery and moving emotion... well done..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"This intimacy of night's first love, so pure with no ambition,
What more to want, but lusts first love or memories of first night"
Beautiful words and description. The memory of sweet kiss and first nights keep us old timers smiling at things done and gone. The poem described beautiful place and memories. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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