"We Live On"

"We Live On"

A Poem by Deepwater
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Lost Love

"
In courage I was first to face that truth,

The things we had, now gone,

Cold was her heart for the man she had loved,

Set, ready, move on,

We played that game for friends or fame

Knowing the end was close, if not gone,

'gw'

© 2014 Deepwater


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his is so searching, open, expansive, remarkable wording

Posted 10 Years Ago


A short story in the poem. You said a lot in the short statements. I like the honest tone and true ending to the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Deepwater
Deepwater

Katy, TX



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Hello Thank you for looking In. Just an Old Soldier, Veteran British Army 70-?? Likes to write poems for Fun and fishing in the Gulf of Mexico, have loved and lost now write, Please Keep Writ.. more..

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A Poem by Deepwater