A mind ahead

The "what will they say" series

If it comes to be
That I am no more
And the warm smile people have come to love
Is replaced by a cold stare of immovable skin
And the mouth that ones brought laughter
Brings the opposite because
It moves no more,
What will they say?
"That he was kind, intelligent and good?
That he was greatly loving and never hating?
Or that he was eerie, and understandable by no one?
Or far worse, that he was proud and rude
Belittling others who didn't see like him?"
Except I can look back from the beyond
I won't know what people will say.
If I really care what they will
I'll live well while I'm here
And hope in the most futile thing
That nobody will hate me and have bad to say about me.

Author's Note

This could become a series, tell me what you think

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

Pretty nice one and its dark enough to say awesomex noel.

[Noeldeeptz]

Thanks Glitch, I read some dark stuff lately and I'm trying my hand at it. U r probably gonna see some more dark stuff.

[Laminators Dubai]

cool....sounds fun to me^^

[Noeldeeptz]

A man dies and we gather to speak of his deeds while alive, be them good or bad. Of his person, whether twas kind or not. Well some alive even worry what people will say after they are not, to them I say, "not everyone will like you, admire you, respect you, or even love you, don't waste your time trying to make all do".

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That cold can hurt sometimes in the moments when all seem so good, People change:( But I see a leaving state here as the person is no more left or died when every one knows yet feel the guilt the shame they did , Things do come back to haunt others in there wrong doings. I had to read this a lot and break it down , I am never good at theses kind of poems ,so I hope I was close. For that's what I came to gather. This poem can help others my friend:)

[Noeldeeptz]

Yea Jon, you came holy, I always appreciate your words dear friend

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Smiles I am always greatful to give to give Noel:)