while I was fallen...

This is a continuation of my last post, the concluding part of "As I was falling".

She smiled at me so sweetly
As I had never seen her do
She then asked me to walk with her
Under the full moon to her quiet lonely place.
While we walked she stopped to speak a word to another
And I stepped aside and looked at her shoulders from behind
They were upright like the pillars of the temple of Diana.
Her hair let loose flowed
Like light threads of silk blown upon by a soft night wind
Her neck skin lustrous
Like that of Helen of Troy
Who sent thousands of battle-ships against themselves
She turned round with a smile on her face
And her eyes, oh her eyes,
They leaped when she smiled
Like a restless candle flame.
We walked onwards and there was quiet around us
I knew the sun would display cerise in the morning
For she is such a beauty upon the earth
She stopped and said to me "my heart is heavy as a feared moment is here, I fear this moment than death for it causes more pain. I love you but I can't be for you. My bones weaken with every passing hour, I'm dying and I can't punish your heart. Find another to love because by adviser's report tells I'll be here for no longer time".
My eyes became teary
But I didn't want to let it out
For I had been taught that it makes a man weak
"This night I'll rather be weak"
Tears rolled down my cheek
Like an infant waterfall just born
I rushed to her to hold her close
And I felt her heartbeat upon mine
Three more beats and our beat was synchronized.
Slowly with our heads bent
We walked back to her house
And with a kiss to her lips I said goodnight,
Afraid that if I said the word
It might happen that I won't see her again.
One month after that night
She passed on and left me here
I couldn't even weep because the pain was too deep.
I merely stood shocked till she was put to ground.
Many years have passed and she still isn't forgotten
And so is every loved one gone
They are all not forgotten.

Author's Note

For all those who said they'll love to read the concluding part of "As I was falling", I give this to.

Reviews

[costa siwale]

I like this piece, well composed..beautiful

[Noeldeeptz]

Thanks very much...

[Antoñyo]

What a wonderful heartfelt piece packed with sincerity and touch.
I thoroughly enjoyed and will be back for the rest!

Thanks for the share

[Noeldeeptz]

Thanks a lot bro, your words mean a lot to me.

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Wow filled with that compassanate love for another but almost cried at the end:( I felt it before and no its never weak to cry ever man nor no man ! Loved it Noel:)

[Noeldeeptz]

Thanks Jon, you are always an encouragement. Thanks once again...

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I am who I am :) Your very welcome Noel:)

[Sami Khalil]

"She passed on and left me here
I couldn't even weep because the pain was too deep.
I merely stood shocked till she was put to ground.
Many years have passed and she still isn't forgotten
And so is every loved one gone
They are all not forgotten."

Sorry for the loss. A great tribute...:)

[Noeldeeptz]

Thank you Samir

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)