Beautiful Sin

Beautiful Sin

A Poem by Noeldeeptz
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Your mind might probably go left while reading it, well that is the design but the material itself doesn't go left. Enjoy.

"
Malley;
Your beauty is sin
It pleads to my eyes
And bids my leg to do bad
Your beauty is sin
It tells my desire
Nothing is forbidden
The way you tilt to the right
And catch the sun
Spreading it from your top to your tips
Adds to your allure in my sight
Your light hard body with ripe rounds
Do I want in my hands
And feel their succulence
Your beauty is sin
It tells me to cross brown boundaries
With promise of bliss afterwards
This sin I want to taste
And know what it's like
Your beauty is disastrous
And too much of it will do me
What I don't know
For all my plenty talk and little action
My ferocious passion and insufficient steps
I will commensurate and take
This step towards you
I'll knock at your brown gate
And walk to where you stand
Look at you from above me to below me
And begin to climb you
And reach out for your ripe rounds
And hope your people won't come out then
And say get down from our orange tree

© 2013 Noeldeeptz


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hahaha
that is the gag of the day!!!!!!o.0

loved it!
thanks for making me laugh like a crazy.XD

Posted 11 Years Ago


Noeldeeptz

11 Years Ago

You are welcome glitch even though I should be thanking you for making me laugh.
Laminators Dubai

11 Years Ago

love to make other laugh noel.....
Noeldeeptz

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
An interesting write. Pen on...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Noeldeeptz

11 Years Ago

You are too kind Sami, thank you.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
I suppose you've read it through and discovered that it doesn't end the way your mind will naturally go...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Noeldeeptz
Noeldeeptz

lagos, Nigeria



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My legal name is Salami Kola. I'm a young man discovering the beauties and dynamics of life. Writing is one of the things I do to understand life. You may find the things I write ambiguous, ask me and.. more..

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