my glow

Just your everyday poem but meaningful though

Walking down the road singing
With my head bowed but my thoughts clinging
To one love that I held
But lost and for it bled
My wound healed and left a scar
Reminding me of what was what behind
I looked back to see it far
In the past leaving me to and find
Another that's fair
And will long adhere
Another that's there
And won't give to despair
I long for her passion "untamed"
From crippled to toddling
My desires were no longer lame
My bliss my delight I found in her cuddling
Each night everyday longing for her sight
That I may run into her arms for my daily delight
Her hair dark and silky
Long and milky
Her eyes wet and dreamy
Shiny and creamy
She causes her words to flow out
Leaving me plenty reasons to stay devout
But no! I lost track and went deep
And when I realized I couldn't even weep
For she no longer was mine
And I couldn't change a thing
Because there was a dividing line
Kept us apart and sought tears to bring
From my heart and cause pain
I did not go to her and say I hurt
Because my pride made me insane
I frowned and I fought
Pushed when I should have pulled
My glow closer to the heart she once lived
Oh no! By pride was I fooled
And she no longer is where she once lived.

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

I did not go to her and say I hurt
Because my pride made me insane ...

i actually did that, sitting on my pride rock, feels like a heart-breaker somewhat...

you are a awesome poet^^
thank you so much for sharing!

[Noeldeeptz]

I'm actually gonna be thanking you for reading and admiring such a humble work of mine.

[Laminators Dubai]

come on pal............a good job worth review.

[Noeldeeptz]

Thanks a lot

[Ankit Mahar]

This is a great poem noel .I am so glad I came across this poem .It was all so simple but so deep .Keep writing bro .You have got talent .
With regards
Ankit

[Noeldeeptz]

Thanks a lot Ankit, I appreciate your words more than you know...

[Sami Khalil]

"I realized I couldn't even weep
For she no longer was mine
And I couldn't change a thing
Because there was a dividing line
Kept us apart and sought tears to bring
From my heart and cause pain
I did not go to her and say I hurt
Because my pride made me insane "


I'm glad to come across your writes. You write splendidly...:)

[Noeldeeptz]

I'm very grateful for your words, kind friend, thank you plenty

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

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Wow Noel that was awesome! That's some deep stuff man! Beautiful work!

[Noeldeeptz]

Jon, thanks a lot for your kind words, I appreciate it.

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Anytime was a wonderful read,I will look more at some others very soon.