Happiness is Rare

Happiness is Rare

A Poem by JUSTWRITING
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As the title suggests

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Open your eyes,
And feel the joyous emotion zap through you.
You deserve to feel the happiness passing through you,
Making you forget all your troubles.

Imagine your happy place;
Now, close your eyes.
Do you feel it?
I do. The rush,
Feeling you're on top of the world
And powerful
All because of the joy, the happiness
Zapping through you.

Bask in its embrace,
As it's a rare feeling
And doesn't come often enough.
Feel the glory.
You deserve to be proud,
After all, you deserved it.

© 2011 JUSTWRITING


Author's Note

JUSTWRITING
Okay, I know it's not my normal style of writing, but I had a bet with a friend to see if I could change my style of writing. And publish it. I win!

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This is a wonderful amazing write. Love the lightness of it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well I have to say, as it isn't your usual style, it still slaps the break of memory. Shocking imagery for a poem not meant to shock, or possibly it is, that the beauty of it. Well done, great flow.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 13, 2011
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JUSTWRITING
JUSTWRITING

Bangalore, India



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I'm a girl who loves to read! And, I recently found that I could...write! I live in India, but weirdly, I don't like Indian writing. I also have (an annoying) habit of correcting people. I love wri.. more..

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