HeartfeltA Poem by JUSTWRITINGIt's true and meaningful. I don't want reviews or criticisms. Just you reading it.
The deep hole
Entices me Pulling me into its endless depth. The darkness seems so alluring That I almost fall into it. There seems to be no one who understands me, And no one seems to care. I don't want sympathy, empathy Or anger. I just want a soul to care and listen. Just to sit down for some time And pay attention to what I'm saying Without giving advice But being there for me. I'm not asking for anything big, Or anything pricey. I just want some of your time And some of that caring nature of yours. That's all I want, And I'll leave you peacefully to go on your way. By the way, thank you For taking the time to listen To hear what I haven't said. For that, my sincere gratitude. © 2011 JUSTWRITINGAuthor's Note
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Added on March 13, 2011 Last Updated on March 13, 2011 AuthorJUSTWRITINGBangalore, IndiaAboutI'm a girl who loves to read! And, I recently found that I could...write! I live in India, but weirdly, I don't like Indian writing. I also have (an annoying) habit of correcting people. I love wri.. more..Writing
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