A Hole

A Hole

A Poem by JUSTWRITING
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Downright human feelings,
Honest to oneself and honest to others.
Does something like this exist?
We create a deep hole within ourselves
Not admitting what we really feel,
With our facade.
Every time we're honest
The hole starts to fill up,
But once we start to lie
It becomes bottomless.
Thus, the hole is never really filled;
It remains, like our race, half-empty

© 2011 JUSTWRITING


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Added on March 11, 2011
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JUSTWRITING
JUSTWRITING

Bangalore, India



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I'm a girl who loves to read! And, I recently found that I could...write! I live in India, but weirdly, I don't like Indian writing. I also have (an annoying) habit of correcting people. I love wri.. more..

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