Confused

Confused

A Poem by JUSTWRITING
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A heart felt poem I made on the spot

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I feel the intense loneliness,

Clinging on to me like some sort of a disease.

All I want is to get rid of it somehow,

But that becomes more and more difficult

As it gets bigger and bigger,

Like a balloon blowing up

Ready to burst at any time.

 

Memories of the past

Come rushing back to me

Taunting me,

Making me long for my childhood

And its simple yet pleasurable times.

The flashbacks keep coming

Stronger and faster.

Defeated, I long for that part of my life again.

Simple yet memorable.

Adorable yet admirable.

© 2011 JUSTWRITING


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. me too ... but couldn't have expressed it as beautifully and skillfully and sensitively as you did ...

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Added on October 7, 2010
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JUSTWRITING
JUSTWRITING

Bangalore, India



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I'm a girl who loves to read! And, I recently found that I could...write! I live in India, but weirdly, I don't like Indian writing. I also have (an annoying) habit of correcting people. I love wri.. more..

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