Fairy Tale

I see colors rushing past me

I have lost all perefrial vision

I flail uncontrolable

Unaware if I am really living life

 

Everything that happened before now

I am compleatly ablivious to

I am not worried though

I am happy

 

Happy like i don't have a care in the world

Happy like nothing I have ever expierienced before

What I am feeling right now is unnatural

I begin to vomit

 

 

But I still see the colors

Like a blur of life flashing all around me

I find joy in trying to catch them

Although I never sucseed

 

The fun part is chasing

Chasing what could be

I chase the colors until sunrise

With a smile on my face

 

Author's Note

I just made up this poem in about seven minuites. Give your opinions.

Reviews

[Melati]

I love the last stanza
"The fun part is chasing
chasing waht could be
i chase the colors until sunrise
with a smile on my face"
Well done!

[SamanthaMarie]

A very fun and whimsical poem! Only suggestion is to double check spelling. Other than that it was a great quickie. LOL

[Wolfwind]

I am certain you speak of the rare and magical everglow rainbow! For the words do shine like one and tis the only type of rainbow that stays afire after the sun lays itself to slumber. ;)

I really enjoyed the piece. It was full of colorful imagery and read smooth, like a flowing stream. Well done!

Aaron

[Mark D]

Really enjoyed! Was surprised at the line I began to vomit. Came at me from nowhere! Very good though. Well done