Lost

Lost

A Poem by maddie

You've infected me with your affection
Then promptly deserted me without direction
I'm lost without your touch
Blind without your trust I'm wondering around in the dark without a lamp
The only thing that I can see are images of you in the insides of my eyelids
Cold nostalgia with every blink
I'm finding my dark surroundings rapidly swirling around me
My stomach is a free-moving object
I can't tell which way I'm moving
But I know where I'll end up
Sobbing into my pillow
So that no one can hear me when I scream obscenities
Because I've given you all of me
And I can't seem to take it back 

© 2013 maddie


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maddie
Straight from the heart... Comment what you think. What do you think of the metaphors?

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It was really good. I showed it to my mum and she agreed. It truly spoke of heartbreak and the metaphors where great! Keep on writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


maddie

10 Years Ago

Thank you! And thank you for sharing it also!

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Added on December 27, 2013
Last Updated on December 27, 2013
Tags: love poem, heartbroken, alone, love, insanity

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maddie
maddie

Woodbridge, VA



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