march 19 2010

march 19 2010

A Poem by deep sea connor

Make your mouth a bullhorn
Through which you shout cuss words
You don't care who's offended
'Cause it's real, it's not like you pretended
Never try to be what you are not
Spinning a web of lies until you are caught
But don't get stuck until you rot
Because you tried to be something you are not

Go to a place that doesn't exist
Where the bugs bite but no ones gives a s**t
Off far away in your own dream world
Where they have the drugs and they have the girls
Can't give it up can't sink back to where you were
You'll pour your heart out if you get to keep her
Tell her things the things you wanted like a little brother
Until the sun comes up and you're right back where you were


© 2010 deep sea connor


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i like the idea of going to a place that doesn't exist.

nice write. the second stanza, line 7 sounds weird in my head though. maybe it's just me?

give me more friend.

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deep sea connor
deep sea connor

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