Karma Awaits

Karma Awaits

A Poem by deepoet

 

Your befuddled hateful torment will not break me, nor partake of me
My jocund heart overflows with the wealth of love from those who matter
Your own misery and hateful atrocities will only incite famine to your spirit each jab you dish, each dagger you send, each dirty look you glare, will only reflect back on you as I continue to walk with my head up high, uncompromised
Your jealousy and controlling insecurities will not subjugate me to your will
For I know who I am, I am who God made me to be, and I walk with my head held high. Your terminal hatred for me will only darken your broken down soul
When oceans of chaos are calmly smooth, you walk through and tsunami ensues, destroying whatever is in your path and does not agree with you.
You feed off of drama and chaos with euphoric gratification for without it your mind becomes too still
Then your own thoughts and demons creep up on you and torment your mind with what ails you as your focus can only be on you, a terrifying mental state, reflection gate, bringing on your own fate as your secrets and demons claim grounds on your soul, your Karma awaits.©2007
~*deepoet*~

© 2008 deepoet


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Yes I like the Word PARTAKE....there is a reason why i use it a lot:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like this and feel it .. i also feel karma awaits many..
This is well written with truth .. a sad tale for many..

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your unleashing of angst in this piece is intense; I especially love your closing lines:
"You feed off of drama and chaos with euphoric gratification for without it your mind becomes too still
Then your own thoughts and demons creep up on you and torment your mind with what ails you as your focus can only be on you, a terrifying mental state, reflection gate, bringing on your own fate as your secrets and demons claim grounds on your soul, your Karma awaits."
Powerful!!

Nicole

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow the heat of this poem is touching me. can you choose some other word than "pertake"?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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deepoet
deepoet

Land O Lakes, FL



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I am a blessed, married, mother of three children. I have been writing poetry since highschool, however it has become a large part of my life in the past 5 years. My every intention is to eventually p.. more..

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