The taste of her lips on mine
Her hands all over my heart
Stolen from me my love
You were
At first a distraction
In time pictures revealed a whole new you
Without me
A year lost
lessons learned returned
Stars aligning to right the past wrongs
In my arms you fall again
My hands still open to hold
Eyes locked
So many words unsaid
3 words understood...standing the test of times past...
Our future remains to be written
I welcome you home...
this is a good start to begin writing again indeed. a good poem that is a bit different in structure then what I'm used to, as in not a lot of rhyming in this. But still love it none the less. A heartfelt poem of a love so uncertain and yet feeling somehow lost....
A wise person know when he made a error. He will do what is necessary to repair and find a way to something good. Poem is very good. I like the story. Many strong statements leading to a ending of hope.
Coyote
I LOVE THIS!!!! and I chose you to review because my daughters name is similar to yours and i see the two names together rarely Her name is Daniella Teresa Coincidence !