The Absolute Nature Of Happiness

I had a very beautiful dream of a very beautiful place last week....

A very beautiful place at a very far distance..... 

from this city of noise.... 

Where the clouds of thoughts begin to disappear.... 

even desires begin to appear just a mirage.... 

Where no more ecstasy or people required.... 

even you self is no more required..... 

Where the words make no mean ..

world make no sense  ..

even you self make no sense ..

Where the god is dead and the temples are fake,

But a bliss and power ....

you can hear in the profound silence of the waves ....

 

And a rejuvenation of your being with the sensation of this cool breeze....

Like the time has held its breathe ....

Yupp ,there is a place at a very far distance from this city of the noise.... 

where you can enjoy and sense even the ecstasy of your loneliness..

and your soul revitalizes with the ultimate peace and relax..

and finds that alchemy with the heartily gratitude towards this great existence......

Thanks ,for giving me such a beautiful MOMENTS.....

With the state of mind--

Just relax , Just relax ,you idiot..nothing is under control..

Reviews

[WhiteCanarie]

It was nicely written, but maybe use less dots. It distracts the reader and gives the piece a vibe it doesn't want. You can give writing a mood and voice without using dots. You portray emotion through the usage of words. So let your written words speak what your mind wishes to say. Paint your canvas with deep, passionate strokes of genius.

[Deepak Sharma]

Thanks alot .ll keep in mind for sure.

[M.A.Rathore]

Very nice with natural beauty...

[Deepak Sharma]

Thanks alot....