Dunning Lake

Dunning Lake

A Poem by Brandon Gene Petit

 

I could see you walking slow along the shore of Dunning lake
A black umbrella in your hands, a black dress flowing in your wake
Your reflection drifting slowly on the gently undulating tide
Obstructed only by the ripples born from black swans in their stride
 
Submissive colors dress you as to not disturb the lakeside fog
Your movements ever subtle as I sketch you in an artist’s log
Advancing ever gracefully along the far side of the lake
The focus of a mural mist; a dream from which I’ll surely wake
 
 

© 2008 Brandon Gene Petit


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"The focus of a mural mist; a dream from which I'll surely wake." - So eloquent is your tongue - you paint silhouettes of enchanted elegance.

~gifted indeed~

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Brandon Gene Petit
Brandon Gene Petit

Port Jervis, NY



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My dreams since I was very young consisted of everything from wanting to make movies to creating video game music, and I always had a habit of not finishing things that I had started. I finally stuck .. more..

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