Taste Of Hate

Taste Of Hate

A Poem by Deep
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"Actually This Heart Is Not Made For Ourselves...This Is Probably For Someone Else"

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Ohh mind mine…

Will you still play 

If they choose a relation over a toss

 

Oh mind mine

Will you only walk

The way they choose…

 

They are quite behind the doors…

Their intentions burst after knocking..

Ohh mind mine

Will you still carry on…

If you know they don’t want to host

 

Life is a stage..

you have to dance upon

You surely going to be hurt

If the rhythm is dual

 

Oh mind mine..

Will they join your pain

Seeing you dancing bleeding toes…

 

 

A candle doesn't itself floors light

it also want a lit...

ofcourse i can't quit 

but can change it a bit.

 

 

After the rain there is a clean sky…

Up to which I want to fly…

Want to lick the each rainbow shade ..

And wash off the taste of hate

They poured ….They filled

 

© 2012 Deep


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Amazing composition here!!
The whole rythm and flow it's contented with is outstanding.....
Loved reading it...actually twice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Wonderful poem! I loved the rhyming scheme and the flow too. It is really sad, but the meaning is still really beautiful. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank You embers...This is a latest song i have made...hope some day i will be able to see it going on air.


Posted 12 Years Ago


wonderful rhyme scheme and flow. deep write really kind of sad, but well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 2, 2012
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Deep
Deep

Bangalore, India



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