Just Why

Just Why

A Poem by Deep

The Passage Of You Was So Sudden..
That You Were Parting Off Our Way..
And I Was Just Left Wondering...Just Why?

Some Moments You Laugh Insane...
Some Moments Are Really Made To Weep
You Were Clueless About My Pain...Just Why?

Truth Is The Only Thing We Still Share
Someone Was Really Needful And Torn
And You Were the One That Has Got It All

Betrayal Is Indeed An Ache For Those...
Who Had Never Imagined Of This Day Before
And Rest Of The Day They Spend Thinking...Just Why?

© 2012 Deep


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Poignant , very expressive and love the just why carrying the flow and yet deeply felt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank You faded embers and Allegory :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


a deep sad write but nicely expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the sorrowful tone of this~ Good job~
And repetition of Just why didn't make me cringe so that's a plus +
Keep on writing~

-Ego

Posted 12 Years Ago


@Jashuya ...My Pleasure :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Made me kinda sad. :) Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

214 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 2, 2012
Last Updated on April 2, 2012

Author

Deep
Deep

Bangalore, India



Writing
Taste Of Hate Taste Of Hate

A Poem by Deep



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..