Is this love?

I felt as if i was drifting away from someone so i thought i'd express my feelings through a poem(: hope u like it.

Is this love?

I start shaking when I see you.

You make me smile without saying anything.

Is this love?

You take my breath away every time I see you.

Your eyes fills my world with happiness.

Is this love?

I close my eyes and I see you there.

In my dreams you make my wish come true.

Is this love?

My heart beats faster and faster as you come closer to me.

I understand you better than anyone else does.

Is this love?

I feel that your with me no matter what.

I feel as if i'm the luckiest person in the world, 

and i feel as if i'm the one who loved you the most.

Is this love?

My heat beats just for you,

And I live only for you.

Is this love?

I feel as if we're together,

But not close.

We almost never speak.

Like we're falling apart. 

Is this love? Or just another crush?

Am I falling for someone over again.

Or is it really love?

I feel as if your the one? 

Author's Note

did u like this poem? did it make u feel a certain way? please review :)

Reviews

[Deep]

and thanks for the advice.

[Deep]

first thanks for reviewing my poem, and thanks for the comments on my poem. do you mean by "i feel as if your the one?" well the question mark is there, cause i'm not sure if he is the one, but he makes me feel like he is, but sometimes i feel as if hes not meant to be with me..but i still love him no matter what and wish he could be mine forever. thanks again.(:

[Gionelly Kiss]

Very well written. It is a wonderful poem that blends with the reader's own experiences and emotions. Please, avoid emoticons in writing. It takes away from what you are trying to express. Otherwise wonderful. Check spelling. Loved the repetition of "Is this love?" also. Quick question: why the question mark at the end? What were you trying to express there? Thanks for sharing. Keep writing...
Gionelly*Kiss

[la Abeja]

Ah, the torture of crushing on someone.
This was a really nice piece. It flows well and I like how every two or three lines you say again, "Is this love?" reminding us of the uncertainty of this powerful emotion. Great write.

[EMW]

I really like this. Makes me think of my boyfriend.