For me.

You hold me tight,

You hold me close,

I hear you heart,

beat for me.

You sigh with me,

You sigh for me,

With every breath,

You pray for me.

You take my pain,

Take it all away,

And give me love,

Love for me.

You gave it up,

You gave it all,

Let it all go,

All for me.

You hold my hand,

You hold it firm,

And promise to fight,

To fight for me.

You make me smile,

You make me laugh,

You're all I want,

All I need. 

You dream of a life,

You and Me,

Me for You, 

and You for Me.

Author's Note

I'm still learning. Just my second poem. Criticism welcomed.


And, its straight from the heart. :)

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

The last stanzas seemed inconsistent. Other than that, this is too good to be a second poetry. I was screwing up mine :P Do put up pictures in your writes :)

Keep writing.

[Helen Crutchett]

Your second poem is it? Well Deeksha this was amazing! I loved the near repetition of various lines....it worked very well! Yes, I can see it was from your heart. This was a pure write and a pleasure to read! Thank you so much for submitting this to my valentine's contest! ~ Helena

[Dillon Cotter]

this is beautiful!! Very enjoyable and soft from the heart.

-Will

[dev]

:) damn nice :)

[Aditya Unni]

Criticism if there were any :).
Beautiful.