passion

written at a weird time in my life....if memory serves me correctly, i was about 17 or 18

Your hiding deep, witin my soul
Your hiding deep, to find, my goal
Beyond the choice to die inside
I find the courage, stay, abide
Touch me so that I may know
fear begone, love to grow
Heavens door, opened wide
It is intended, it's not to hide
Shame cannot share this Light
The fire given to burn bright
I wait, come fill my cup to brim
So I may live, a passion for Him

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

A great example of the unspoken word.
Perhaps a better phrase would be; a story
of life in a few words.
Beautifully written.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[dante alexius]

I like this poem.

well written except for the spelling and some questionable punctuation.

read this version of your own poem:

You're hiding deep within my soul.

You're hiding deep to find my goal.

Beyond the choice to die inside,

I find the courage, stay, abide.

Touch me so that I may know,

fear begone, love to grow.

Heavens doors opened wide.

Its intention not to hide.

Shame cannot share this Light.

Fire given to burn bright.

I wait, come fill my cup to brim,

then I may live that passion for Him

consider the changes. mostly the punctuation aids the flow of your poem.


thank you for sharing,
-alexius