That Perfect Place

A work in progress, a song I started a few months ago and forgot about. When I write songs it happens in 5 minutes or less then I get back to them to finish. This one I haven't got back to yet.

the rain is pourin', down on his head

wind picks up, takes his silent regrets

he looks up, smiles, asks is this your best?

standing tall, he's not beaten down yet

 

take me away, to that perfect place

where the sun always shines and memories don’t erase

show me the painting on the wall that still shows your face

the perfect reality that we don’t have to chase

 

snow is fallin', down by her feet

the temperature drops, close to freeze

she looks up, smiles, says i cant be beat

standing strong, she's still on her feet

 

take me away, to that perfect place

where the sun always shines and memories don’t erase

show me the painting on the wall that still shows your face

the perfect reality that we don’t have to chase

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Author's Note

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Reviews

[declangray]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm working on finishing it, I've went back to it a couple times so far but lately my mind is a scattered mess of words.

[Viet Pham]

You should really finish this and keep up the quality, it is really good so far!

[....]

I really like what you have so far. Love the flow and rhyme. Awesome!!!