Unforseen Closure

Another song with no music.

I try to hold you close
Closer to me to feel your heart
So darling, hold me tight tonight,
Please don't fall apart.
I tried to be an angel
With broken wings in darkened skies
But you always knew of the demons who
Reside inside my eyes.

You wanted more
So much more than I have to give
So you promised me love
Just to help me live
But now I'm drowning
Dying in every picture of you
Left running, I'm running
And I don't know where to

Please smile
Tell me thaht you'll live
And that I'm gonna cope
And I'll stand here
Just to watch you leave
Just to lose all sight of hope
And if you come back
You better tell me that you're gonna stay
Cause I'm done with the chances
And she doesn't even glance
When I cry
She walks away

I can't ask you to stay!
I can't be begging you please
For another day
And don't say,
"You'll never stop..."
"You'll never stop loving..."
Cause you do...

I won't ask you to stay!
I can't break my heart
For another day
And don't say,
"You'll never stop loving me...
Cause its true..."

Author's Note

Written from two different perspectives.

Reviews

[Will Zombie]

"And if you come back
You better tell me that you're gonna stay
Cause I'm done with the chances"

My friend you've finally got a way for me to relly critique haha.
you've got a way with your words. Its aggressive but extremely passionate which almost adds to the aggression, but it adds in different ways. Sort of like the way fighting is one thing, fighting for something that means the world is another.

Its a pressing piece buddy.

[Kiri J]

"You'll never stop..."
"You'll never stop loving..."
Cause you do...

I don't know if it's always true, but it's always better to have loved...
This is so raw and heartfelt, I can feel it fresh off the page.
It's lovely Declan x