Battlerap

Battlerap

A Poem by Declan Cooney
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Mmmm anger....*droools* (* editted for the sake of gramatical failure)

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Your battlerap better be better than a page long
Cause I got you beat with both brains and brawn*
My fists are hot, they raise alarms
I don't rock glocks, but I got razor arms
It ain't a phaze because, I'm Haze, come on!
My thoughts take longer to read than the Quran
When I'm blazed its amazing, cause I'm just hazing along
I find it enraging, all you believing in God
I'll drown you in chains to make you atone for your flaws
And then re-raise you
Ultimately enslave you
Divide your center by infinity
And mathematically erase you
Then replace you with nothing but a memory
So step back, and go classic
And don't f**k with Haze
Or else you won't remember me.

© 2008 Declan Cooney


Author's Note

Declan Cooney
Fight back.

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From just a grammatical perspective, brons isn't a word, it's brawn but I never can tell with rap lyrics what's intentional and what's not. Other than that, it's really quite good. I think you should read some books on religion, because the part I enjoy most is the parts about holy wars, and if you increase your knowledge of spiritual terminology, you might be able to evolve this from just being some sick s**t to bust out with to something that depending on your audience, could actually chill someone's soul. I also like that you name dropped Mcguyver in there....you've got a good style, and I think I'll have to read more of your stuff.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Declan Cooney
Declan Cooney

Phoenix, AZ



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My name is Declan Cooney, I've lived in Phoenix, Arizona all my life. I was born on July 18th 1990. I love rap, rock, and hip hop, however, I still enjoy all types of music. I write about my life most.. more..

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