Painting of beauty

Your beatuy is like a painting

Colorful to the eye

I don't know how to say it

But I float when we are together

It's not as complicated in my mind

As it is to do

My heart will sink

When some one takes you

Nothing makes sense now

You're changing my world

Give this a chance

And take my hand

Let some love in

Reviews

[Muse]

short, simple, but poetically sweet.

[Lively]

It seemed a little confusing to me. Nice poem. But you could have a better play with words.

[Bianca La Salle]

i really like this one :) nice write.

[deleted]

I m not the type to point the negative and in this poem to me i see nothing bad :D hoenstly i love how its short but meaning so much i can relate alot to this poem so its also a plus keep it up i enjoy reading your writing an di cant wait to see more like these.byeeeezz :).xoxox.
-linda

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I enjoyed this, sweet lines... lovely tittle for the write, some spelling miss types. Nice write.