Her life

Her tears are breaking out
Her heart has been broken
She crys out for what was lost
In the beginning as the murder of her heart
Came from the most likely suspect
Her loss of love destroyed her very core
Abused to the point of being scared
She'll feel alone for the first time
She'll sit at the table
Dreading how she's going to tell him
Wondering if he'll try to kill her baby
Thinking of how she was raped
Lost in her own world
As she begins to cry
Who will help me now
She cries

Reviews

[Sabrina Demartini]

heartbreaking

[alerodri]

this is sad but what i needed for inspiration
it was like baam

[Say]

This is heartbreaking.

[tenkyu]

sad, but nicely written

[Carrion.]

I love it... so sad :l

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

sad and beautiful...heart breaking, the emotions in these lines, relating to real situations that happen; you captured this well... i enjoyed this.

[Aifey Jayd]

This was beautifully written, sad though. I love it in all honestly. You are a magnificent writer.

[Suzy Q]

Sad, yet it happens.
"Her loss of love destroyed her very core"
Love those words.

[guiltyascharged]

So sad, and so scary. I could feel the emotions, nicely said. Flow was well and I thought I sensed an attempted rhyme..(?) But good all the same.

[Lively]

Sad...