Color My World

C olor my world in

O paque shades of blue

L est I be ambiguous in my

O bscurity so inclined to uncertainty 

R avish me and leave me mesmerized

 

M imic not my frailities uncertain

Y et bestow to me the grandeur of thy love

 

W hisper sweet nothings in my ear as you color my world in  

O paque shades of blue

R omantic interludes with you

L eave me breathless and wanting in my

D esire for thee my love

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like this. I think it flows very well.