Wasted

All those years

Wasted

Washed down the drain

When the bad outweighs the good

These memories cause such pain

Can't stop the rain

From falling

Down

All those tears

Wasted

Crying in vain

Washed down the drain

When the bad outweighs the good

These memories cause such pain

Can't stop the rain

From falling

Down

 

 

Reviews

[~*The Writer In Me*~]

Good poem. Not quite as good as "Down the Drain." I really liked that one.

[Blue Sky]

Can't stop the rain from falling down
shared a great piece with sad notes
formation is great like going down the drain.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Deep and powerful... the pain can run your life that is why you need to let loose sometimes and just enjoy the moment.

I do understand where you come form in this.

[Ladysue]

Expressed so poetically and with such truth. A very sad piece, but beautifully written!!!