What If Heaven Was A Place?

What if heaven was a place

Called planet Earth

And the Creator walked among us

What if heaven was a place

Like this beautiful garden

And we were created

To take care of it

What if heaven was a place

like this Eden

With trees and animals

River and streams

Mountains and vallies

Filled with such wondrous things

What if heaven was a place

Where you could see God's face

In the eyes of every child born

What if heaven was a place

With rain and snow

Sleet and hail

Wind and sunshine too

What if heaven was a place

Not so far away

Would we take care of her

Would we cherish her

If heaven was a place

Where the Creator

Walked with us

Talked with us

Died for us

 

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I'm afraid a lot of people still wouldn't take care of it--especially if there was profit to be made.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Beautiful. This made me want to repost a piece I wrote about heaven, fabulous work!

[Dibbo]

Insightful and nice

[Sheila Kline]

In your comment, you said you were wanting to write a poem that was not sad, and now you have! This is truly beautiful, and I have enjoyed it so very much!! What if? Oh yes!!!