Sunrise To Sunset

 

Such were my dreams for you

Each of my darling daughters

Sunrise to sunset

For your lives to be wonderful

For you never to know hunger

Cold beds or poverty's ugliness

Such were my dreams for you

Each of my darling daughters

Sunrise to sunset

 

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A mothers love is twenty four seven and unconditional... beautiful sentiment my friend.

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a wonderful poem, and I can so relate since I myself have a
daughter. This is sweet and sentimental. The picture fits perfectly also.
Thank you for your review of my poem Black Ice.....AD

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I think you should replace "was" with were to make your verb plural with your direct object...dreams.