The Reflection In Your Eyes

 

T he Reflection In Your Eyes

 

T he reflection that shines in your eyes

H oping that my silouette is what you see

E ach time you look at me

 

R emember I am looking back at you

E very time you glance my way

F uture is bright as a shiny star

L ifting my spirit to soar

E very time you leave my side

C an't wait until the next time we meet

T he reflection in your eyes shines through

I  hope the light in your eyes for me never dims

O n cloud nine I find myself when you hold me

N o one ever told me love could be so grand

 

I  feel so special when you look at me

N ever dreamed I could feel this way

 

Y our eyes they dazzle so

O ut on the dance floor

U nder the moonlight

R eflections in your eyes that I see

 

E ach time you glance my way

Y ours eyes speak to me in that obvious way

E very time I gaze into those

S tarry eyes I am hypnotized

 

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Enjoyable graphic touch, the title reiterated vertically, letter by letter, line by line.

The romantic poem itself has the universal cheer of a good Valentine's Day card.

The striking eye image re-emphasizes both the Valentine impression, and complements the concrete vertical title letters.

Nice touch!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

You are very good at this form, a nice romantic read on a cold damp night here in Carolina.