Love Winter

(for a contest) (minute form 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4)(my first attempt at this type of poetry form)

 

 

I do love winter time it's true

Sledding and snow

Building snowmen

Throwing snowballs

 

Christmas time is the time of year

Sleighbells ringing

Caroler's sing

Favorite songs

 

New Years Resolutions to make

Pretty hearts glow

Valentines Day

As March winds roar

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Helena]

Very good Debby....you nearly had it right, you just had to
have each two lines rhyming and it would have been correct.
Nice try though and thank you for attempting this form.
Keep submitting to the form challenges, and they are a "challenge" all right!

You have done excellent for your first try. Pat yourself on the back!! LOL

Hugs Helena :)

[~*The Writer In Me*~]

Winter is a great time of year. It's the reason I moved back to Montana.

[Dalaina Renee]

I love your poems! They are always a delight! This is so cute!

[O!]

I just cant stand the winter...but ur right....the Christmas aspect and the New Year around the corner are things to look out for in the winter.........so ill now start thinking differently when the cold bites!...

Good luck with the contest! :-)

x,
O!