These Shoes

 

T hese shoes have walked thousands of miles

 H eld my weight when I could barely stand

 E mpowered me to stand strait and tall

 S ometimes these shoes hurt my feet

 E mbarrassing moments whenever I trip

 

 

S tumble or fall flat on my face

 H elped me to get back up

 O n my feet once more

 E ach time I slip on these shoes

 S hoes once shiny and new

Reviews

[George Love]

This is one I love! The flow, the meaning and feelings come shining through with no breaks. Excellent work here! A must read!

[Rain]

Your attitude, heart and soul, reflected in words written about a pair of shoes. I love it. Rain..

[melancholy]

cute shoes.it speaks of a woman moving through life and making mistakes and picking up the peices.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

a well-written acrostic! Brava!

Sal