Same Old Song

Music playing in my head

Same old tune over and over again

Sometimes I wish

The music would stop

Words to songs repeating themselves

Same old tunes over and over again

Sometimes I wish

The words would stop

Like a broken record skipping

The melodies keep playing

Same old tunes over and over again

Sometimes I feel like I could scream

The notes keep dancing in my head

Same old lyrics over and over again

Sometimes I wish

The music would stop

 

 

 

Reviews

[Spoken]

i can relate to this. some rhythms you just hate to repeat. Some lyrics tell a story you don't want to echoe in your ears. Sometimes i find myself clenching my eyes and holding my hands tight to my ears saying "stop stop thinking that stop!"

excellent execution feeling well felt

[Blue Sky]

very nicely penned piece
as the same ol song keeps playing

[alyssa]

i feel this poem!!! i sometimes feel that way too!! my fav lin is when you said "Like a broken record skipping

The melodies keep playing Same old tunes over and over again" again really well writen!! love it!!
hugs

alyssa

[Brianna Brie]

Yes, there have been times when that tune becomes torment. This write however, reads deeper to me. The tune it brings to mind is the negative talk that we play over and over again in our minds. The dancing music notes are a wonderful addition to the poem.

[George Love]

Very well done, and in a lyrical tone as well. We've all had this happen with a song, poem, story or a line that kept pounding at us over and over again. You express it very well here. Great work and thank youf for sharing!

[Angel Baby]

I understand this write, only I have words that never stop floating around in my head. Guess that's the writer in me. Enjoyed this well penned write. Thanks for sharing. P.W.

[melancholy]

cute! what song is in ur head-i have kids..lol

[just is]

I hope the music never stops, A world without music would be nothing, I like this write, very creative