Beside The Still Waters

Beside The Still Waters

A Poem by Deborah Leah Krempa

Beside The Still Waters

 

B obby, I walked beside the still waters with you today

E very where I looked I could see the smile upon your face

S erenely the river flows out to the sea

I thought about you all the day long

D own by the still waters just passed the waterfalls at Side Cut Park

E very where I looked I could see the beautiful colors of the changing seasons

 

T his reminded me of you and the last time we walked this path

H appy I was to spend that precious time with you my darling son

E verywhere I walked today I've walked with you before

 

S unshine filled the sky today with just a few fluttering white clouds

T he park was filled with families, children playing, and much laughter

I  shall remember you this way for you played here as child too

L eft your footprints in the sand and climbed the many trees

L eft me with these beautiful memories

 

W alking beside the still waters with you today my darling son

A loving tribute to you written in the form of poem 

T hat I might share this lovely day with someone new

E xpressing the beauty that was you, may your spirit be free

R eflections of you and me in this river I shall always see

S tanding here arm in arm beside the still waters

© 2008 Deborah Leah Krempa


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This is just so lovely and very spiritual in every essence
and though gone he will always be with you, better yet
always will walk with you wherever your heart walks, and
only you would know when he is with you in that time of missing him
he will always walk with you by the still waters in your heart and soul!
This is most beautiful, such a ouching poem!
You created another wonderful accrostic one!!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i attempt not to talk about your loss
but to talk only of the beauty
the beauty of the writing

you talk of The Still Waters
The Still Waters can be deceiving
they run deep and swift

i know of a stream in pilipinas which looks
as though you can wade across when i attempted
i found myself under water in south china sea

sweeped quickly from a beach outlet
and quickly out to sea
all that i was carrying was gone



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is just so lovely and very spiritual in every essence
and though gone he will always be with you, better yet
always will walk with you wherever your heart walks, and
only you would know when he is with you in that time of missing him
he will always walk with you by the still waters in your heart and soul!
This is most beautiful, such a ouching poem!
You created another wonderful accrostic one!!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 20, 2008
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Deborah Leah Krempa
Deborah Leah Krempa

Toledo, OH



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I am grandmother,.. My children and my grandchildren I love them all so very much. They are my gifts from my creator, the blessings in this life. I simply adore poetry and the .. more..

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